heroic stanza (iambic pentameter quatrain) for “andalokseer”

i wish your days get better one by one
and brighter ev’ry day as hope may rise,
as steady and enduring as the sun,
so only tears of joy shall fill your eyes.

Revised Version (2011.05.14)
I pray your days get better one-by-one
and brighter ev’ry day as hope may rise–
as steady and enduring as the sun–
so only tears of joy shall fill your eyes.

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